Friday, October 26, 2018

Humiliating Hight jump

Humiliating high jump
The sun was as bright as my future.
Squinting at the blinding blue mat.
Strong, shimmering bar.
“Is this compulsory?”
“HOPE NOT!!!”
Carefully observing people fail with curiosity.
I swiftly jog up to bar and using all my
momentum and I take the risk… but like always, gravity
 wins.

By Willow

1 comment:

  1. I really like your science word and your great title . Maybe next time you can change your title.... maybe . Great job .

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