Why you should have me in your car if a tsunami occured
Hello I am willow, but you can call me papasmurf21. And today I will be
explaining why you need me in your car.
First of all, I used to want to be a paramedic, so I know ALOT about first aid.
I can save someone if they have hyperthermia or hypothermia. I also know CPR.
I can prevent an infected wound from spreading. And unlike all the kids in my
class, I can make a sling and also put it on, this skill is very useful and hard to
learn. Having me in your car could mean I could teach everyone paramedicine
and first aid.
I smell good. Everyone else in base mill smells like body odor, no offence
intended, it's the truth. Would you really like to be stuck in a car for hours
with 4 rat/kids that reek of garbage and sweat? NO! I'm pretty sure the
majority of base mill doesn't wear deodorant. Me, Lyriq, Legacy & Monica
are the only children that don't smell bad. You need me and my crew in your
car.
Thirdly, I know how to kill and catch birds. But I won't be telling you how until
you let me into your car. Knowing the best way to kill animals can come in handy
when you want to survive. I also know how to craft spears, because at the
start of the year, I would sit by a tree and sharpen sticks until they
were razor sharp. This may seem slightly concerning but it's a good
skill to know.
In conclusion, There are SO many more reasons you should have me and
the dream team (me, monica, lyriq and legacy) in your car. Fun Fact, I
can navigate and read a compass. But, to be honest I don't need to explain
everything else because I already know that im going to get a spot
in your
car. Im pretty cool aye? You don't have to answer that question,
I already know im cool. Thank you for reading my writing! Can't wait for the
tsunami!
-Papasmurf21
Kia ora Willow, I'm Sophie from Saint Patricks School. I really like how you have worded your reasons. I think maybe next time you should explain how this writing helped with your learning. It was really good overall and you had so many reasons that are really good.
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Hi Willow,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Kayla, from St Patrick's school Greymouth.
I really liked how you added comedy and how you gave plenty of reason why I should have you and your "dream team" in my car!
This reminds me a little bit of a movie I have watched!!