In Rm 3 we are learning how to improve our blog comments.
Before
I like how you have used descriptive language.
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Hello Legacy. My name is willow, I am learning to be a smart learner. I really like how you used descriptive language. Maybe next time you could add a personal comment in your conclusion. Do you think you could add some more to your classification?
Friday, October 19, 2018
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Please structure your comments as follows:
Positive - Something done well
Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Kia ora Willow,
ReplyDeleteI can see a big improvement in your blog comment. I really like the way you have suggested adding a personal comment in the conclusion. I can see you have taken time over your improved comment. Did you remember to get someone to check it?
Mrs Krausse