Thursday, May 23, 2019

A moment in time (From Captain Cooks perspective)

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Willow,
    I read the writing with interest as the tension built up and was holding my breath because of the tension you created. What an ending!
    I like the way you made the text prominent on your page . You used an appropriate image in the background that did not distract my attention away from the text. Well done!
    I would like to see you include in your blog post reflections on your learning. How did you know about this story? Did you read a book or see a movie?
    What other stories do you know about Captain Cook in Turnaganui-a-Kiwa?
    Mā te wā
    Mrs Torrie

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